Saturday, December 4, 2010

First Kiss

Not just a kiss
A first kiss
Our First kiss
A kiss on which a dream was built
During which, heaven revealed
All fears shattered
All egos scattered
Freedom finally conquered
And trust no longer just a word
Who's to say we can't fly
For we've never been so high
Who's to say we can die
For invincibility is on our side
Not just a kiss
A first kiss
Our first kiss
Rapadoo,

5 comments:

  1. You fully master your writing style, been able to write for people like me who are unfamiliar with Greek mythology and those who are, is a plus. This poem is simple an easy to comprehend, it’s beautiful and full of excitement, I love it. It’s my kind of writing lol. After reading that poem I went back to some past decades of my life lol.

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  2. Thank you anonymous, I'm glad you think so.

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  3. @SP Such a great compliment, thank you. I'm afraid I have much to learn though. As for the simplicity, you're right. This poem, although short, is straightforward and pack a retroactive punch that take you down memory lane. That's what makes this interesting in my opinion. Everyone has had the experience at on point or another and it's unforgettable. Thank you for your comment.

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